My writing goal so far this term is to write complete sentences by showing one where sentence ends by putting in appropriate punctuation, and starting the next sentence with a capital letter.
Here is a piece of writing about the rain.
Splish splash splish splash. The rain is bucketing down like hammers nailing a broken fence board back in place. As I walked outside,whilst the rain was still pouring it smelt divine. Cold and crisp fresh air. After a while I decided to go back inside,when I got inside I realised I was as cold as an ice block and so numb I couldn’t feel anything!! I heard the thunder clap like a giant’s deep, loud voice booming across the land. As I stared out the window the
