Zara's Camp Writing

Camp Writing 2017   Zara  Braithwaite

L.I : Use different lengths of sentences for a purpose

L.I : Follow the whole writing process

L.I Use different sentence starters

As I rode through the tall pine trees that were looming over top of me  I practiced changing gears . Ouch, my hand got really sore as I frustratingly struggled to change gears . Oh no it’s my turn to ride over the ramps .‘Keep going ‘ you can do it ‘ I thought as I was recapping everything Sam  the instructor told us : fast speed , level pedals , stand up on your bike and look forwards .  This was only the first ramp I was already slightly hesitant .I  quickly ascended the  ramp . I was thrilled . I actually made it over the ramp ,I thought I was going to fall off and fail . Miserably . But I  succeeded .

I was staring at the pine needles scattered across the ground while I was waiting in line for my biggest fear . The See-Saw . I was scared but I was still determined to conquer the seesaw and face my biggest fear .I was the front of the line nothing was stopping me so ….

Now for the see-saw . If I was nervous before , that was an understatement . As I approached the see-saw it felt like it was rushing towards me like a big horrifying monster . But once I was on it I was ecstatic . The tilt Of the see-saw was like a miniature turn of a tiny rollercoaster . I wish there was a time machine so that I could go back and replay that moment over and over . I loved the feeling the wind in my hair and feeling successful as I had conquered it . I enjoyed it so much I want to do it all over again . If there was any activity that I want to do again I would definitely say mountain biking because  I enjoyed it so much I want to do it all over again .