I lay stiller than a stone lying on the bottom of chilly lake Wanaka . I felt infuriated as I had just lost one of many battles with my devastatingly annoying little brother . He was angrier than a rampaging bull charging straight at me . Just because I borrowed his pens .
I lay still listening to everything around me .I could hear little wax eyes chirping a harmonious song outside my window . While my cat peacefully purred by my side . The clank of knives and forks showed that delicious dinner was nearly ready .
Slowly I fell into a deep sleep dreaming of nothing but light , fluffy candy floss clouds and sparkling rainbows glimmering in the sky as the sun’s radiant light reflects off them .Yet to suddenly have to wake to go to dinner
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